Honestly its a really good story. Ended up reading it all non stop. As a fan I am obliged to ask: When is the nexy piece coming out? @_@
I love your story. I don't think I have ever read a more satisfying breast expansion story before. I love the lactation element. It's always been a very arousing thought to me to imagine my breasts swollen with milk, painfully needing help with draining them, and the part with Kara's collapse and subsequent "therapy", was very enjoyable.
I can't wait to read more. I almost don't want the story to ever end.
Thanks so much!! I just responded to your other message on DA. I really appreciate the feedback! It makes me really happy to hear that at least one person wants this to go on forever!
Thank you for sharing!
Bigger chapter, bigger appreciation of your writing. Enjoying every bit of it. Keep up the fantastic work!
Just to let you know: chapter 9 is now posted on DeviantArt. Enjoy!
Dear god, this is the only thing I've ever wanted out of life.
...not the pic, but the sight of a topless, overly-buxom, overly-enthusiasic girlfriend about to pull the usual Calvin-and-Hobbes joke.
I would say where Jim is becoming more comfortable with the girls and vice versa. I do appreciate where after even sone growth in their hone it didn't straighr up lead to sex like most other stories.
My only gripes with the story are you seem to use the same adjectives with Tara's lega (powerful). And minor minor issue is you mentioned Jim's name as James at the beginning and then just never mention it again.
I'm currently working on it and it's around half-finished, give or take. Hopefully by the weekend or so but no promises!
I'd love to hear your favorite parts sometime! Helps me focus my writing.
EpicTits, who you may know as the artist of the current Overflowing Bra front page image (and many others in the past) was nice enough to illustrate a scene from my BE and AE story ["Same Difference"](http://tusdine.deviantart.com)! He's going to be illustrating more scenes in the future, as well!
I did make a deliberate choice to avoid the characters having sex immediately and I'm glad you liked that. The tension leading to that sort of thing is very sexy to me and it also very frustrating sometimes but makes the payoff much better. That said, there may be some sex soon, but I plan to have the characters ponder if they may have rushed things. The story won't become overly dramatic - but some issues like that keep things interesting. Thanks for your feedback!
Thanks! I can barely believe that he came out of "busty art" retirement because he liked my story so much. It's crazy.
Wow, congrats on EpicTits illustrating one of your stories! That is definitely one of my fantasies, but I've never had any biters. So sincere, jealous congratulations.
Honestly its a really good story. Ended up reading it all non stop. As a fan I am obliged to ask: When is the nexy piece coming out? @_@
I love your story. I don't think I have ever read a more satisfying breast expansion story before. I love the lactation element. It's always been a very arousing thought to me to imagine my breasts swollen with milk, painfully needing help with draining them, and the part with Kara's collapse and subsequent "therapy", was very enjoyable. I can't wait to read more. I almost don't want the story to ever end.
Thanks so much!! I just responded to your other message on DA. I really appreciate the feedback! It makes me really happy to hear that at least one person wants this to go on forever!
Thank you for sharing!
Bigger chapter, bigger appreciation of your writing. Enjoying every bit of it. Keep up the fantastic work!
Just to let you know: chapter 9 is now posted on DeviantArt. Enjoy!
Dear god, this is the only thing I've ever wanted out of life. ...not the pic, but the sight of a topless, overly-buxom, overly-enthusiasic girlfriend about to pull the usual Calvin-and-Hobbes joke.
I would say where Jim is becoming more comfortable with the girls and vice versa. I do appreciate where after even sone growth in their hone it didn't straighr up lead to sex like most other stories. My only gripes with the story are you seem to use the same adjectives with Tara's lega (powerful). And minor minor issue is you mentioned Jim's name as James at the beginning and then just never mention it again.
I'm currently working on it and it's around half-finished, give or take. Hopefully by the weekend or so but no promises! I'd love to hear your favorite parts sometime! Helps me focus my writing.
EpicTits, who you may know as the artist of the current Overflowing Bra front page image (and many others in the past) was nice enough to illustrate a scene from my BE and AE story ["Same Difference"](http://tusdine.deviantart.com)! He's going to be illustrating more scenes in the future, as well!
I did make a deliberate choice to avoid the characters having sex immediately and I'm glad you liked that. The tension leading to that sort of thing is very sexy to me and it also very frustrating sometimes but makes the payoff much better. That said, there may be some sex soon, but I plan to have the characters ponder if they may have rushed things. The story won't become overly dramatic - but some issues like that keep things interesting. Thanks for your feedback!
Thanks! I can barely believe that he came out of "busty art" retirement because he liked my story so much. It's crazy.
Wow, congrats on EpicTits illustrating one of your stories! That is definitely one of my fantasies, but I've never had any biters. So sincere, jealous congratulations.